Reflecrion of ''The Missing Piece Meets the Big O.''
The narrative suits to introduce to everyone. In my opinion, it talks about interpersonal association, it uses a funny way to describe meanings, I consider that it reflects the man who wants to be a popular person, he feels like to alter himself, therefore, he asks someone for help, maybe others are able to give him advices, in order to attract the vision of the others, but no matter how he is decorate still the original oneself is the best.
We usually forget an own essence, especially we care other people too much about own impression, although it is significant to perform ego, but the inside affirmative better than the outside modifier. The most important thing is play a good role in one’s own life, don’t be others’ shadow, and then can get along with others in harmony, so be filled with self- confidence is also necessary, finding out the own fixed position, following these standards, what we just know is what we just want.
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Dear Jocelyn:
I'm glad to see your new article, because your opinions sometimes are interesting and useful.
I agree with your idea, in fact I also think that the self-confidence is a major message in this story. With self-confidence, you can affront events much easier.
I'm happy that we have the similar thought, we have a tacit understanding. It represents that we are such good friends, isn't it?
Yours, Rachel.
Dear Jocelyn,
It’s nice to read what you say. Your article showed another expression form mine. You wrote the story of the missing piece is like someone who wants to be popular, but it is always glad to be himself. It was great.
I’d love to give you some tips on writing. First, you can add conjunctions in the content and more words to strengthen your conclusion. Second, you have some run-on sentences; you can separate your sentences by period and semicolon. Then, you will write down your summary with fluent narration.
You are an active learner. You have a positive attitude toward life, and confident of success because you have prepared well. After practicing several times, you can improving quickly and write good compositions in the future.
Best wishes,
Lynn
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