~~Teachers just don't understand~~
“Teachers just don’t understand” the story talks about Mrs. Johnson, the woman who was a teacher. One day her daughter, Lu Ann got sick, Mrs. Johnson took the whole night all accompanied at her daughter, therefore, she felt tied. When her husband came home they discussed how they should arrange the time to keep company with their daughter while Lu Ann had to operation. Mrs. Johnson made the final decision, she wanted to on leave, because of taking care of child. She went to school, the awful things would all happen to her, she was late to school, and she had to hand in the report before she left, moreover, her students were noisy when she attended the class, she was mad very much, she required Ronnie to hand in the homework, he didn’t do well, he tried to tell some reason but the teacher said that it was excuse, and then ordered him to vice-principle’s office.
I like the top paragraph, Mrs. Johnson is very considerate to look after her daughter, and maybe it is be a mother’s responsibility, both roles of a teacher and a housekeeper are difficult to make the balance, so couple should learn how to share family affairs.
It is a little interesting story; the teacher can not accept the student’s reason and consider that it is an excuse, the behavior is wrong, she should concern about the student whether face some problems or not, not just only blame him. The story also talks about when the teacher was late to school, as the same as she told the reason why she was late, this article tell us everyone will make the mistake, we should try to give a chance let him explanation.
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3 comments:
follow your mind~
believe your thinking~
trust it ! do it !
you must become the best !
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To Tim:
Oh! Thanks, you are the best friend, I'll remember your encouragement.
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Jocelyn~
Dear Jocelyn,
Your article really makes sense. Sometimes people make mistakes, and everyone needs chances to improve. Your opinion is good and positive.
You have good ability in writing. I’d like to give you some suggestions to you, and I hope they would be helpful. First, you can simplify your summary and make it organized. Second, you can write down more thoughts about this story. Last, you can use more sentences to support your main idea.
I found that you are a clever student and always willing to learn new things. I learn a lot from you, such as be agile and alert when facing problems. Thank you very much, my friend. In my opinion, you will write better compositions in the future.
Sincerely yours,
Lynn
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